Attempted to read this awful crap that should never have been published. Made it 30% in before I had to stop. I could feel my IQ points dropping with every page turn. The writing is childish, mediocre, and just plain laughable. It's monotonous, ridiculous, and I couldn't stop shaking my head at it. This is not how a proper Dom/sub relationship should be; this is basically abuse. I'm sorry if that offends anyone, but it's the truth. Ugh. Not even gonna bother with the other two Twilight fanfics...oh, wait, I mean "beautiful literature that tells a romantic love story." Please. This is just...not worth the read.
